Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/3232571/014e0e4b93/

This is a not edited translation, 100% machine made
If you don't want to see MTL, you can block the "rough translation" tag, it gets automatically added to all MTL

Ok atleast we got mtl better than nothing

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@RyukiGH i would rather read the raw one than this crap.

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@matxeon I'm already used to shitty mtl after reading a lot of novel to the point where mtl doesn't even bother me anymore

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@matxeon Weak

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Here's corrections on about 10 pages I've found so far. Props to you for disclosing this is 100% MTL, but I still wish you would have gone through and proofread.

Better title translation: The Tale of the Fallen Knight

Page 1: "Is everyone accounted for?" > That's everyone...

Page 4:
Was there nothing while I was away? > Nothing happened while I was away?
Yes, no problem. > Yes, no problems.

Page 5:
Welcome, Serenelark. > Welcome Serena, Luke.

Thank you always. It must be tough with your knight duties... > Thank you as always. I know being a knight is tough work...

I really appreciate it. > I'm truly grateful.

Don't worry, Director, Half of this is a homecoming to the place where we grew up > Don't worry about it, Director. Half of it is just us visiting the place where we grew up.

Page 6:
Yes, and they really want to talk to me, a Holy Knight who came from an Orphanage. > Yes, and he really wants to talk to me, who grew up in the Orphanage and became a Holy Knight.

Page 10:
As you can see, the amount is significant, so it's not easy for me to say that > As you can see, the amount is substantial, so it's not easy for me to pay it on your behalf either.

I can cover it, and I find it hard to discuss the possibility of cutting off support... >
I hate to say it, but we're in a situation where we have no choice but to consider discontinuing support...

Like this... > This...

That's good to hear. > That's good to hear, Serena.

So, Serena, I will take on the Orphanage's debt and continue my support in return for... > In exchange for me taking over the orphanage's debt and continuing support,

Page 11: Overlapping text
What do you think that orphanage...those children are? > That orphanage... What do you think those children are?!

I can only hope they aren't sold to some 'perverted child lover.' > I can only hope they don't get sold off to some pedophile.

Page 12:
...And just one condition...let me state it. > ...But let me add just one condition.

Page 13
Hehe, you're still tense, my honey is so stiff > Heh, still nervous? You're so stiff, my honey.

Crunch, crunch, crunch. > Honestly i'd just leave it as the sfx. Kori, kori, kori, kori.

I'm...I'm stopping... > Stop...Stop it...

Page 15:
Oh? This is sweat...but not quite. > Oh? This...isn't sweat.

Ro may be cheeky, but her body seems to be getting ready > Your mouth may be cheeky, but your body seems to be getting ready.

Page 17:
You're the one twitching your pussy and drooling. > You're the one making your pussy drool.

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