This is an AI translation, right? The translation of the first panel on page 12 makes no sense in English (Miyu mishears 誤認逮捕, "mistaken arrest", as 五人逮捕, "arrested five people", because she's forgotten the former term and they're pronounced the same in Japanese)

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Yes this submitter exclusively posts raws and english AI translations.

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Glad to see you've put some effort into editing the AI translations.

Not perfect (as noted above) but a solid improvement over earlier works.

Typesetting could use some work but hope you keep improving.

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Why does F_tsf always do that whole "describe the transformation to make it happen" thing? It doesn't even make sense in this story since the girl was already transformed by then and the blonde one was fully there. Starting with police officers is creative I guess but it degrades fast into identity death slop.

The artist did a great job but they deserve better writing.

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@ast4 That style is common in a lot of older Western erotica which I’m fairly certain F is influenced by. One of their earliest works (the student ID one) is basically direct plagiarism of an older story on Fictionmania.

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which fucker rate this so high, this mtl slop belong to garbage

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"Brainwashed to think your real identity is just a character you were portraying" is a really fun idea. I especially like that she seems to accept that version of reality at the same time that she finally loses what's left of the police uniform. And taking the story at face value, despite only the two cops appearing, the guy appears to have transformed the entire police station into a brothel and presumably everyone in it into employees, which is obviously a win-win. On the other hand, Blonde Former Cop's characterization is weird: not only does she apparently get instantly brainwashed between pages, but her resulting persona comes off less like she thinks this is all normal and more like she's deliberately helping to brainwash MC Former Cop. It would almost make more sense if she'd been in on the whole plan from the start, but if that was the artist's intention then they didn't convey it very well.

Separately, the MTL is trash and the yuri tag is inappropriate.

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