https://kabochaaan.fanbox.cc/posts/5031660
https://fantia.jp/posts/1684031

Based on: https://e-hentai.org/g/2896534/b6f04f9561/

Wanted to get into the swing of things for translating again, apologies if the earlier pages are a little rougher.

Some feedback in case you want it, the translation is ok, but the typesetting and editing can use some work. It's not too many pages, so it should not take very long to ensure the text boxes are smaller than the bubble and such. Some of the fonts look different from the rest in the same bubble or are blurry, I'm not sure why. I think you can do a great job if you work on these things.

Base +8, VixaZ +6

Thank you for the feedback and kind words. The font is always the same, but it's blurry sometimes because I have to manually adjust the text by resizing it. The program I'm using, paint.NET, is really not suited for this kind of work, since I'm tweaking text size between 2 and 3 already, no real granularity. This also causes the text to be too big for some boxes.

Do you happen to know what software is normally used for this? Don't think I can fix these issues if I continue using the same one.

Base +8

@dobuch
You used the resized raws. The original files are 4299 x 6071, or roughly 3x the vertical resolution. Using the proper files would both make it easier to do typesetting and also just look better.

For software, most people are using photoshop. If you don't want to use paid software, GIMP is free and is more suitable for this than paint.net.

Base +25, VixaZ +6

You should use photoshop, or at the very least GIMP. Paint is not suitable to get a good result.

Base +8