Feedback please ;)

I hope you like it 😊

Ears are not pointy but I also want to see more

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Thanks for the feedback, DeadEyesBastard! I fixed the ears ;)

I will try to upload more. I already finished around 170 pages (yeah I have been busy this week lol) and the plot is already kinda finished but writting the dialogues and editing each picture is kinda time consuming so I would probably upload one or two pages everyday.

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Thus far, this is the best work you've posted. More of this one please.

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@Azoz4122 "I will be uploading one page everyday"
My only piece of feedback would be to not drip-feed the updates to this, a I've seen people get negative reactions before by slowly uploading their ongoing things (and by doing that, repeatedly bumping their galleries to the top)

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Why did the size of the skeleton and muscle mass increase so dramatically?

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@gamerzzz1 He has a special elf magic that increases the size of his skeleton and his body muscle mass xD

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Seems that magic also made him grow boobs. See page 17, panel 2.😏

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@Tonythekat, holy shit!! I can't believe I missed that hahaha thank you I will update it today xD

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好可爱🥰

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Kino. Make 200 more pages

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Would like to see elf getting physically feminized ^_^

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@spiral_masta, Yeah i think im gonna do it in chapter 5, its gonna be hot as fuck to finally see him physically feminized, but let's not rush the story ;)

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Will the elf be the one taking the lead in bed? Just once?..

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@gamerzzz1, Yeah that is exactly what gonna happen in the end of chapter four😊 The little elf is finally gonna have some fun😚

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Azoz4122, good news.

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You’re doing very well in my opinion. For medium sized works(5-10 parts) your pace is better . But if you do big stories in future focus more on world building and introduce more characters. I really loved the style you used for your Naruto story. I wish you could more works with shonen mc’s as protagonist it’s really arousing. For ex. - Luffy getting captured and undergoing procedure go be the admiral’s wife etc. I’ve got a lot of ideas if you have any socials we can converse.

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@Luffy98765_123, Thanks for the feedback, right now im only focused on this comic because i personally like it. I haven't yet thought of making a new comic, I probably will start making a new comic once this one finished but this comic might end around 250-300 pages so it might take a while hehe. And yeah i also liked the naruto comic i made. I really wanted to continue that one because i had great ideas for that plot, i might come back to it later (or make a new one)

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very good !

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