Nami: 'This rubber thing is boring…'

Luffy: 'Hold my hat'

Nami finds her new shopping find a bit underwhelming. Luffy, however, proves to be exactly the kind of excitement she was hoping for.

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Hey Pirate, thanks again for sharing!

I believe this work is better than Yoruichi Fashion Week. I mean, the sex scenes are far better. There's clearly a evolution between them. The frames are more organized. It feels less artificial and more synchronized (authentic). The story is very linear too. It's not random, neither disorganized. You should focus on improving sex scenes, because story scenes are already at a high level.

Points you should look into:
1 - improve blowjob scenes. I think they're very repetitive. Nami and Youruichi works have the sames scenes.
2 - improve facial expressions. This change is the most impactful in my opinion. Maybe the hardest too. Take images 86 and 96, for example. They didn't fit well in your sequence, because the facial expressions are forced or not well made.
3 - keep producing linear content. The more linear it is, the more authentic (natural) it feels. When I say linear, I'd like to emphasize content that's not forced. Your sex scenes are not forced, because there's a story in the background. Scenario, situation, conditions, etc. Everything changes. You use story-based characters, not a generic white or black guy.
4 - Sequence is very important. It feels like the content is progressing and that it makes sense. Keep improving the sequence between your images. The more progressed it gets, the more people will like.
5 - it's good to see another AI artist respecting proportions. Your characters have features tantamount to their original appearance. There aren't ENORMOUS tits, ass or penis. These bizarre appearances are destroying immersion completely. Although I haven't liked your Yoruichi comic, she was definitely very beautiful because you didn't exaggerate her body. The same goes for Nami.

These are my points so far. I like your approaching, because you post content regularly here to know what the community thinks of your work. It's very democratic. I'd like to keep seeing your content here and improvements as well. Have a nice day!

Last edited on 27 March 2026, 23:52.

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Hello Witt!

Many thanks for your feedback! It is very valuable for me to understand in which areas I need to improve and it's not always obvious from my perspective. So much appreciated!
I am currently working on a new gallery and will publish it soon. Hope you will check it out and notice some improvements! :)

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