Feedback please ;)

I hope you like it 😊

Ears are not pointy but I also want to see more

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Thanks for the feedback, DeadEyesBastard! I fixed the ears ;)

I will try to upload more. I already finished around 170 pages (yeah I have been busy this week lol) and the plot is already kinda finished but writting the dialogues and editing each picture is kinda time consuming so I would probably upload one or two pages everyday.

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Thus far, this is the best work you've posted. More of this one please.

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@Azoz4122 "I will be uploading one page everyday"
My only piece of feedback would be to not drip-feed the updates to this, a I've seen people get negative reactions before by slowly uploading their ongoing things (and by doing that, repeatedly bumping their galleries to the top)

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Why did the size of the skeleton and muscle mass increase so dramatically?

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@gamerzzz1 He has a special elf magic that increases the size of his skeleton and his body muscle mass xD

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Seems that magic also made him grow boobs. See page 17, panel 2.😏

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@Tonythekat, holy shit!! I can't believe I missed that hahaha thank you I will update it today xD

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好可爱🥰

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Kino. Make 200 more pages

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Would like to see elf getting physically feminized ^_^

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@spiral_masta, Yeah i think im gonna do it in chapter 5, its gonna be hot as fuck to finally see him physically feminized, but let's not rush the story ;)

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Will the elf be the one taking the lead in bed? Just once?..

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@gamerzzz1, Yeah that is exactly what gonna happen in the end of chapter four😊 The little elf is finally gonna have some fun😚

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Azoz4122, good news.

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You’re doing very well in my opinion. For medium sized works(5-10 parts) your pace is better . But if you do big stories in future focus more on world building and introduce more characters. I really loved the style you used for your Naruto story. I wish you could more works with shonen mc’s as protagonist it’s really arousing. For ex. - Luffy getting captured and undergoing procedure go be the admiral’s wife etc. I’ve got a lot of ideas if you have any socials we can converse.

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@Luffy98765_123, Thanks for the feedback, right now im only focused on this comic because i personally like it. I haven't yet thought of making a new comic, I probably will start making a new comic once this one finished but this comic might end around 250-300 pages so it might take a while hehe. And yeah i also liked the naruto comic i made. I really wanted to continue that one because i had great ideas for that plot, i might come back to it later (or make a new one)

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very good !

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I’ve just had an idea. There’s that famous porn meme where there’s one girl surrounded by lots of black men. What if the main character in this comic went to an elven settlement full of cute elves?

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Hey @gamerzzz1, I Love the idea. I did think of something similar a few days ago but instead of elves i thought of goblins. In chapter 6 the man will go out of town for two weeks and the elf would be so desperate for any type of sexual outlet and that’s when he comes across a group of goblins, but they take one look at him and gets scared and run away, so he try to lure them by feminizing himself with a lingerie outfit hoping to lure them back.😚 That's just what i thought of a few days ago. Your idea also seems interesting👌

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