I hope you and Yorumi enjoy it.

Please support the artist:
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/list/=/article=maker/id=77991/
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/circle/profile/=/maker_id/RG45025.html

https://e-hentai.org/g/2472154/61154ec13e/ raw/original
https://e-hentai.org/g/3872194/d17f57e2b5/ Chinese

Yup, great stuff, thanks for all the effort and sharing to all involved, nice work :)

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Bless Fuzui. Does it so well every single time.

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On Page 23, the man's text box is highlighted in pink like she's saying it instead.
That doesn't seem to be an issue with the original translation or the Chinese translation.

I also noticed you edited the text versions of pages instead of using the textless versions, which loses the transparency on the text bubbles.
The ones that weren't baked into the textless version at the start anyway, which are also opaque.
You probably could have just gone text bubble-less honestly to keep the transparency while saving effort, at least it kind of looks like the text might be sufficient by itself either the stroke lines it has, if you would be willing to test what that looks like.

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Yes, the colored text is a mistake. I was handling two versions in different languages at the same time, so it was easy to make a mistake. I'll update the gallery soon. Thank you for pointing it out.

When it comes to the speech bubbles, that's a somewhat tricky situation. You're right that adding text to the textless images could save a lot of time, and that way I wouldn't have had to rewrite the translation because of space constraints. (Actually, I could've used a smaller font size, but that's another story.) When the artist first released the images separately, all the speech bubbles were translucent. Afterward, he put out a collection, and somehow he changed them all to opaque except for those on two pages, which was, I guess, very likely an oversight. I did consider using translucent speech bubbles for a better visual experience, but I ultimately decided to respect the artist's creation and keep the hand-drawn bubbles as they were. Anyway, thanks for your suggestions.

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...Probably still a better job than working for Kurosanji...

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