I liked it, felt very in-character and with modern jokes. I'm a sucker for creampies and deepthroats (that are actually deep), so this one is a favorite.
If you keep posting your work here, I'd suggest puting your links in the comments for easy copy-pasting.

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His dick on page 13 looks like something I would have drawn onto a stickman in middle school

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