You probably wants to level up your editing first before tackling on commission. To be honest I would I ask for a refund if what I paid out turned out like this.
@bagiaaa respectfully bro i read some of your works and i dont think i'll be taking tl advice from you. This is by far the lowest effort i've put into a TL ever cuz i genuinely dont like this series. only reason i did this was cuz i wanted to complete the series since i tl-ed StB 4 and 5. If you feel like you can do a better job please feel free to do it, its public domain and people will appreciate a better TS/TL.
“Low effort” but you’re expecting to get commissions??? That doesn’t make any sense. Usually if someone wants commissions, they show their best portfolio to convince clients. What you’ve done here is nowhere near something that’s worth selling. I know my work can’t compare to other editors who are way more talented, but at least I try my best to give results that are actually decent and worth enough to read for my clients. What you’re showing right now reflects how serious you are about handling client requests.
At the very least, try working on another doujinshi and prove what your “high effort” actually looks like. I'm waiting.
EDIT* Just to clarify, the doujinshis uploaded by myself was all of my personal project. I joined a couple of translation group as an editor and that's where I actually learn and get better and it gave me confidence to finally take on a paid commission. You probably should try the same.