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Hey you!

Chapter 0 is over and served as an exercise for this one.

Chapter 1: Dark Times will be slowly updated from time to time. Hope you enjoy this story!

The initial releases will contain little to no eroticism while the story is being set up. Please excuse this, allow me to ask for your patience. I hope you will still enjoy the world I am presenting to you in the meantime.

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Your feedback is welcome, take care!

Argaulix

Very nice use of Inkarnate! Congratulations!

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Thank you! I enjoyed so much using this soft to make the map, this is a blessing!

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Oh yeah now it’s starting to get good

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Yes screwit77 this chapter took a long time to get started. In my opinion, it is better to know the characters well before unleashing the corruption!

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Very exciting :) Looking forward to more!

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The problem for me is that I'm not sure what the kink is you're going for. If it's transformation, it's hard to get into it when the TF is relatively light. If it's corruption, it's hard to get in when there's not a process to it. The second they get dosed with the elixir, they're gone. If it's a story, then there's no real tension since nobody can resist the boarmen. If it's just sex, then all the story gets in the way. The use of yuri in the tags, is also weird for me, because there's basically only two lesbian scenes, and one of them it's really a threesome. If the pigmen are supposed to be evil, then it's weird, because they get SO many scenes of them being 'super nice people'. If they're supposed to be GOOD, then the fact that they are, well, sexist pigs, is kinda a turn-off?

Like, Aly was an interesting character, but the second she MIGHT have defied the boarmen, she just goes "Nope, I'm evil", then there's a tension she MIGHT still spy, but one more dose of that D, and shes' gone.

Like, it really feels that it has one specific fetish. "Pig guys fuck hot girls into liking it". Which is a thing...but a VERY specific thing.

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Hey Mitchell,

Thanks a lot for your thoughtful comment, I really appreciate the time you took to analyze my work. Honestly, I hadn’t considered the “marketing” angle of my comics before. I never really thought about what category they fall into or how to label them.

As for the transformation aspect, I did want transformations, but not too extreme. Too much transformation can quickly erase the beauty of the (human) woman, which I still want to preserve. I believe corruption is necessary for female characters to switch sides, but I also want the story to give that process meaning, something more than just raw renders. Personally, I find it more compelling to get to know a character first, then watch her slowly fall.

That said, I know I can’t spend a whole year developing characters and rendering slow scenes. At some point, they have to fall, even if it feels rushed or poorly written (sorry about that).

My characters, my world, and my story don’t need to follow traditional storytelling patterns. I believe people can carry both good and evil within them. Pure manicheism, where someone is entirely good or entirely evil, doesn’t interest me and doesn’t serve the story I want to tell. There are different cultures and perspectives beyond our usual moral frameworks. No one is purely good or bad, it’s more like real life. I'm not sure I understand this part of you comment...

So the point of the comic isn't to follow a specifi kink of a specifi kind of story (evil/bad), but to tell an erotic story with some transformation and corruption. Just find something here, of not ¯_(ツ)_/¯

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Genuine question, do you want me to elaborate on the good/evil angle? Because, it wasn't exactly a 'pure good' or 'pure evil' as much as 'where the audience's sympathy is supposed to lie'.

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Too much piercings, I'd say. You could leave some characters without for those who don't like it.

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