Trouble finds Revy on her long-awaited vacation - she’s afraid of getting out of shape. Determined to fight back, she jumps from one workout to another… until she discovers the most enjoyable way to burn calories.

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Hey, Pirate! How have you been?

Good to see that you're working with split panels. They give the feeling that I'm reading a manga. Very good!

Kisses and lick images are amazing. Creators should look into it more, in my opinion. It's very attractive and creates a feeling of sensuality.

You changed titjob order. Now it makes more sense.

I didn't like the images from Revy's back (71, for example). I think they do more harm than good. Maybe you should try a side frame (angle). It's more natural.

Cum frames are now adjusted.

Actually, there're almost no mistakes. A thing or another that I'd change, but nothing compromising. However, Revy sex scenes feel more empty for me. It's more an impression than technical stuff. Have you seen how many faces she did during the story? At the bar, restaurant or airport. She was much more lively, not so mechanical. Why don't repeat this kind of behavior with sex scenes? I mean, she's very aggressive and brute in the original story. So, her characteristics are present on my mind. I was expecting this kind of behavior from her during the sex. She's a way too passive. That's why your Blonde Blazer and Nami works were more impactful (at least, for myself). With these works, you could capture their essence (characters' characteristics). I know I'm talking about something very intangible. Revy is a very complex character. It's hard to work at her. She's very known too. So, every time someone sees your work, they'll definitely associate her behavior from the original story and your content. That's what makes AI more or less artificial. Could you tell me if your Revy is really from Black Lagoon or is from another place? That's my point. To know how to work with the character essence. How to do? With expressions, behaviors, gestures, positions, scenarios, situations, etc. Let the creativity runs freely.

I don't know what's your intention with AI. You could keep working with a lot of characters as you're already doing, or work with fewer and try honing them to perfection. I prefer the second option, because I value quality over quantity. But, my opinion doesn't matter! Your supporters' opinion is what matters to you. If they're already satisfied, please keep your good work and current style!

Please, ignore me if you think I'm talking nonsense. As I sad before, it's just an impression.

Have a great day!

Last edited on 14 April 2026, 23:40.

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HI, witt10, thanks, doing good.

When I started - I concentrated on single characters: there’s different Tifa stories and there’s big Fiora leveling series, it felt great to work on a single character, but I feel that I am missing a lot of other potential interesting stories and working on different characters gives little more freedom. So my current plan is to work on different characters in different settings. As you probably noticed - I am also experimenting in different styles so characters correspond to their original source.

Always appreciate such detailed feedback.

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