go fuck your self and die please.

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Thank you for proof reading.
At least with a rough attempt of proofreading, I can't see any obvious mistakes that most MTL have.
So it's already loads better than others.
However, it still reads pretty rough, but that's prolly cause it's not a good story.
Seems more like just a collection of scenes and kinks.

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someone else save this series pls

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Is this sadism? Masochism?

Are you trying to feel good after doing this shite? Do you really love getting flak by everyone?

I don't know if you are trying to be a prick or something, but when someone pirate stuffs here, at least do the honor by actually translate the whole thing thoroughly. Professionally.

Someone paid real money to DLsite and stuffs and go in length uploading it here. Pretty sure the uploader really be wishing the stuffs they paid with their hard earned money, get translated by real human with real translation skills. Not with AI slops.

You are a disgrace of our kind.

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