It took me two weeks... It's my first comic, so any hate/critique would be welcome!
Images for that comic was generated in SD.

It seems you mistook this site with a trashcan. Please don't do that.

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Thx! I love when sb insulting me like that. It makes me horny <3

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@ailoveuvm it wasn't an insult for you. You asked for opinion on what you posted, I told you, is all.

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Ok. Justifying why you don't like something can be intellectually demanding. I completely understand that you don't have the cognitive abilities to write anything more than 'what you've created is garbage'. But don't worry! I am sure that someday you will be grown up enough to do so!

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Please tag your trash properly so I can blacklist said trash

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Than you YuiKaidou! Finally, a comment that actually adds something! You're right! I admit I'm at fault. I didn't tag it well enough. I'm sorry to everyone who came here looking for a cute comic with a little bunny and got hardcore porn instead (I know how you feel, because I felt the same when I watched Made in Abyss and saw that arm-breaking scene). Unfortunately, I can't find an actual list of tags, so I just went with my gut feeling. If you have any suggestions for what tags should be there, please let me know! I didn't mean to hurt any of you. Sorry again!

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Work on limiting your words - the dialog is a bit of an overload in most of the panels.
Panels need action that flows from one to the other more smoothly. End of page 6 is the worst example where she goes from facing away to turned around and I think climbing him. No need to rush - show intermediate panels.

Good luck - I hope you have fun making comics.

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Thank you. Could you recommend an exemplary comic on this site?

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To much setup and then it just ends, imagine if you went to the movies and it built up for an hour and then was over in 30 seconds. Sometimes this is an issue of the creator wanting to tell a story and the adult side is secondary but usually that manifests as a ton of pages that build a story, here it feels more like things just got rushed or you got tired of the project.

As another comment says its very text dense. Page 3(4 if counting cover) could easily be multiple pages, and then the next one after that basically turns into a short story rather than a comic, comics are meant to show, not tell.

Like the content, image quality is fine, just need to work on the pacing.

Looking forward to seeing how part 2 goes and how you improve.

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Thank you for the comment! You're right, I also felt that it was too fast and that there's too much text in the speech bubbles. The problem I faced was: "Speed it up and finish it, or abandon it due to lack of time and hope that someday I'll feel like finishing it." And then I remembered how many things I've already put off and left unfinished, so I decided to speed up after all. I have an idea for 2 more parts, but this time I won't limit myself to 5 panels nor rush.

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erm...Keep up the good work! im sure one day you'll produce a good quality beast feral furry comic which is my kind of kinks. Gambateh!

5 star for me becuase why not? its not that as bad honestly.

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