Greetings,

Some points I'd like to make:

1- I liked your scenario choice because is unconventional.
2 - The events sequence is good too. Combining sex with foot licking in the same frame is a masterpiece. I'd change a thing or another, but nothing compromising.
3 - Good to see original characters. AI creators are exaggerating their contents with a random BBC or BWC.
4 - You preserved proportions. That's an amazing point! It's so frustrating to see a a skinny girl with GIGANTIC tits or ass. It breaks immersion.
5 - A lot of expressions and positions. It's awesome to see so many variations from a creator's work. You should keep improving this point because is essential to your development.

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