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Played stupid and got her man. Queen shit Alice!!!!

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>page 14 "Licking them makes my nipples so hard" 舐めてると乳首が固くなって this is AI shit. Just your average "Licking them nipples make them hard." instead the TL AI BS implies licking them is making MC's nipples hard.
OR you could have read your shit and went with "Having them licked is making my nipples harder" and shit.
This deserves a rough translation tag, or maybe we could finally have a proper MTL tag so we can all blacklist this shit.

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@meimei346 good catch on page 14, fixed it. appreciate the proofread but calling a whole scanlation ai slop over one mistranslated line is kinda wild when the other 46 pages are fine lol

ps for everyone wondering, the change was on page 14, switched my to her so it now reads licking them makes her nipples get so hard instead of licking them makes my nipples get so hard

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@meimei346

Before flinging around accusations of AI, it is probably best to actually look at the whole body of the translator's work. You can actually click on the person's name to search by uploader. From that search, I see no evidence that this man is a bad actor. Lots of uploads, no bad ratings or rough TL tags.

Another useful piece of evidence here is the cleaning and typesetting. That was clearly done by a human, and generally, if you're putting the work in to format a half dozen or more fonts, you're at least putting in the effort for editing.

@longkidkoolstar

Thank you for translating this one.

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LKK is a known MTL abuser and hack. You're batting for the wrong guy here.

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@morpheustheus appreciate you having my back, tysm

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I agree with @morpheustheus this is a work well-done. i've checked it with the original Japanese text myself and it's good. like @morpheustheus said the clean typesetting in speech bubbles is too neat for it to be ai. @longkidkoolstar this site is full of poorly socially-adjusted people throwing around "ai shit, go d*e, f**k this f**k that" when most of them don't know Japanese. in this case, @meimei346 is correct about the translation but not about this work being shit. anyways, left you a 5 star rating

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Type setting could still use work with this user, too many times they put a single or two characters on a different line, which breaks up the flow of reading. Example on this work is page 5 where they just have a y on one line.

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I used one single line because it's the classic no subject in Japanese mtl gets wrong all the time because it doesnt have context. any person who speaks japanese at elementary school level gets it, it's a specific mtl error no human makes. I aint gonna waste my time double checking every page from your tl and the japanese text to point out all the errors.

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