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JPN RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3218411/c3062d7b8c/

TYPOS
page 2:
- bottom right: "... from a lovely women" - from lovely women
- bottom left: "... in the old guy like me" - in an old guy like me
page 3:
- top left: is Exemen in the original as well? if yes lol
- bottom right: "I have nothing to say that" - to say to that
page 5:
- top right: wrong gender? also "is this only the best way..." doesn't flow well, other bubbles have similar awkward ordering.
page 15:
- bottom left: "this feelings" - these feelings
page 16:
- bottom right: "i'll really gonna be... tremble with excitement to the fullest" - the way this is worded is a bit everywhere, i'm not sure what the exact intended translation is here
page 18: "maybe my shop" - i'm not sure if this refers to the skin shop (so no typo) OR the coffee shop

Base +6, Toushiroo -11, randomname12131412 +7, berzerkfvry +8

The artwork is excellent, but it's just not enough! 555

Base +5