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This is just my amateur feedback, but thank you for putting in the effort yourself instead of just chucking it into MTL.

Pg. 1: “Oh wait, isn’t this swimsuit look really cute?” Isn’t should be doesn’t. Alternatively, remove look from the sentence. “Oh wait, doesn’t this swimsuit look really cute?” OR “Oh wait, isn’t this swimsuit really cute?”

Pg. 2: “You little cute devil~” This is one of those things that native english speakers just know but can’t explain. Cute should be before little. I remember a video I saw once explaining the proper order of adjectives, so you should be able to find something yourself. “You cute little devil~”

Last edited on 12 July 2026, 14:36.

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