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Fairy Kingdom, Goddess Worship Kingdom, Mechanical Princess Kingdom and then there's Japan. Just Japan...

Base +7, sitora +6

With this many issues, you should be asking for a refund. These are just the ones that I caught.

Page 20: grammar collapse, reword.
Page 30: I think you forgot the article. Twice.
Page 32: Shouldn't the subject and object be the same in the second sentence? Also, I don't think that's a rod.
Page 33: Another spot of wonky wording.
Page 37: plural/singular self-contradiction. Also, bad grammar in general with regards to "too".
Page 38: I think you forgot the word "been".
Page 39: "into test" is not good.
Page 40: "it's" where you should've used "its".
Page 41: Same mixup.
Page 44: Wrong tense, should be "cover". And other issues.
Page 47: Plural issue, missing article.
Page 48: It is "you've".
Page 49: Bad word order

Base +7, Jalis +7