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JPN RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/g/3057982/80fb228f97/ (066-073)

Sequel to https://e-hentai.org/g/2462515/cbc1301df0/ (page 8-15)

Base +7, TheBloodedge +6

Theirs a couple extra words, and some typos, but overall a good translation.

Pg. 1: “Let’s give it today our best shot!” Either get rid of today or move it to the end of the sentence. “Let’s give it our best shot today!”

Pg. 3: “This actually feel pretty good.” Should be feels. “This actually feels pretty good.”

Pg. 4: “This is numbing sensation” Remove the is. “This numbing sensation”

Pg. 5: “So you’re not good with being started at so closely.” Typo, should be stared instead of started. “So you’re not good with being stared at so closely.”

Pg. 8: “That makes senses~” Should be sense. “That makes sense~”

As a native english speaker it can be tricky for me to articulate exactly why something is wrong, so all I can do is provide corrections.

Base +6