[Synopsis]
Akira Masahiro's daily life is filled with work pressure, and while looking for entertainment, he discovered a girlfriend rental service.

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This is a good start. Wonder where it goes from here.

Base +13, XiaoHsiang +6

This is not bad, but man the ESL dialogue is rough sometimes. Having a native English speaker punch up your script, or at least edit it, would go a long way in selling the material

Base +6

@Mattox33 I'm still learning English, and since I'm not a native speaker yet, I mostly rely on translation tools :)
however, I'll do my best to make the dialogue sound more natural :D

Base +5