This is my first translation, so hopefully it's good. I went back and fixed most of the major errors and did some corrections with a dictionary and intuition. Also did some small panel fixing/redrawing. Also rewrote some of the dialogue to make it sound more like a human and be true to the series.

The shading on the girl's bodies is weird and gross looking.

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I really love this doujin.
thanks for the translation OuO

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>my first translation
You didn't translate it. You people deserve to be skinned.

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I did actually manually translate parts, I'm not extremely proficient in japanese, so I relied on the high end fine tuned LLMs for the parts I didn't know, but almost every bit of dialogue is rewritten after looking at the source japanese, I used the LLM to understand what idea was coming through.

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