First time doing a rewrite of one that doesn't have an English release yet, not the best feeling.
Maybe I could do you all that service after this selfish rewrite, this is not indicative of my JP comprehension capabilities
Original work - https://e-hentai.org/g/3905115/6165c13a91/

First of all, thanks a lot for translating and sharing this story. Unfortunatelyk there are some tropes I dislike; the shallowness of the background or the characters, the villainess' insta-win or the weak will of the defenders,

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This a great translation.

Base +6, EzlaPhrata +3, StoneNeeded +6

I think its great, good art, actual dynamic art and artistic flair, you can tell the artist actually enjoyed making it instead of slop garbage. Storys simple but i mean come on its porn

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is it not missing pages at the beginning?

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Dayum, thats the good shi... though, wish the scenes were longer

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I love this artstyle!

Also tfw no demon mommy to turn me into her daughter :C

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In pornographic comics, even a powerful female mage who can destroy heaven and earth can easily be defeated by the weak goblins. It's really unreasonable

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Love the art style but the story is kinda boring ngl. It takes like 2 pages for the villain to beat a magical girl, then the next one shows up, takes another 2 pages...

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