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Cuchuflin seems to start his stories pretty light hearted and goofy, then by the end it's damn near body-horror, psychological thriller.

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@moximoore It probably gets boring after a while to do nothing but porn, gotta mix it up a little.

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@ThatStrangeDoll

It would make more sense to just do THAT story, instead of an erotic one. The tone shifts are very jarring.

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@moximoore Personally? I find it kinda charming. The author seemed very confused on what they were trying to do a while back, but they've slowly become more confident in experimenting. It does feel like they're struggling to tie together the eroticism with action and the more character focused drama, but they've definitely improved along the way.

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While experimenting isnt always bad. The type of story theyre trying to write would be better as a narrative first , erotica second kind of story. The tonal shifts are jarring for those ho are reading this simply to see kinks, and pokemon is usually a more light hearted medium. While i love thier art the third chapter kin of turned me off from the rest of thier stories . As we went from enjoying a desensory pit, bodymod, egglaying scene, to this story about the MC's emotional turmoil with the other character introduced. I like both types of stories, but not when the second one is sprung out of nowhere, it made me feel really bad and emotional when i was just here to enjoy some stuck in hole fetish the author draws pretty well. These types of chapter should be Seperate from the main story as side stories, for people who are more connected to the characters and want to learn more about them and thier struggles.

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@idiotmonkey I get the frustration, but if the author wants to make a story with jarring tonal shift, that's a valid writing decision. I personally love huge tonal shift in stories like this one. I get it if you don't like it, everyone as the right to like or dislike something, but that doesn't mean it's bad or need to be changed. It just mean this comic isn't for you.

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Imo, lowkey i like when story gets serious i'd like to see more of this

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Okay, I NEED to see the next chapter.

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