Pretty good but feels rushed. Like you jumped to her wearing a dress but we didn't see her putting on the panties. Would have liked for the alien to feminize the body more while trying to find men, bigger boobs, longer hair, etc. Also not sure if the alien returned control to the host during sex.
hey @ast4, thanks for the feedback, I actually really love your idea of making the alien feminizing him more (especially after the library scene) I will do it in my next update👌