About This Series: As the author mentions in the afterword, this first chapter is all about the setup, the confusion, and the transformation process. The actual action kicks off starting in Chapter 2, so there's plenty more content to come!
This is a 5-part series. If you want to see what happens next, you can check out the RAW Japanese versions of the rest of the chapters here:
This author gets it. The actual process of growing the dick and its associated changes physically and mentally is almost always glossed over and it's leaving so much extra fetish fuel on the table. Even here with an entire chapter dedicated to it, it could have been expanded on more.
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I think it's really cool seeing the hormonal changes mess with her head. A slower build-up with her gradually noticing that boobs look kinda nice and seem to have a magnetic effect on her gaze would be cool. There's a couple lines, but I kinda want a whole lot more lead-in.
But mostly, my sense of realism demands more time spent on the "growing balls" part. Knowing balls and ovaries both develop from the same proto-organ, I feel like ovaries should turn into balls and that's really going to be a bigger deal than clitoral enlargement, and it deserves more than a one-panel "is that a ballsack?". This is more of "a serious medical complication" scenario. ... Look, if we're treating this more realistically than "I suddenly grew a dick, let's have sex", then spend a bit of time on the balls!
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