I've been curious for years about what the fucking fuck is actually happening in this book, so I decided to translate it (with assistance from multiple websites and dictionaries), figure it out myself, then post the results here.
Obviously this isn't even remotely finished, but I want to put up as much as I can now. Shirow's annotations, divided between world-building and notes on his thought and production process, are REALLY FUCKING EXTENSIVE, and translating them all is going to be a pain -- but a man who puts this much thought and effort even into his porn has to get some kind of respect. (The non-horse-related stuff will have to come in a later update.)
UPDATED: Fuck it, there wasn't a whole lot of translation to do here, so I'm getting to the main part everybody remembers from this. There will be more to come -- eventually including, I hope, the rest of Shirow's notes.
You have my total admiration for taking on this project. This is totally new to me and I'm anxious for you to post the rest, lets face it, the yuri bits are the best. Shame though that this is also censored, I hate the fucking censors with a passion. Thanks and good luck with your efforts.