the pacing was quick which was nice, but there wasn't enough of an internal conflict in Missy towards having sex with the professor. she started out as a cis hetero guy so she should have more of an identity conflict over wanting to fuck him. Also once CiCi enters the picture, it rushes too fast as it tries to finish up Missy's transformation and begin CiCi's. And CiCi is initially set up to be the "champagne" but ends up being functionally identical to Missy. extremely lame climax imo
my god what an amazing story, i fucking love that the sexy bimbo keeps her little clitty and cums from anal, amazing word, would love to see more like this <3