Took an old text story I did in the 2000s and updated it as a comic with AI illustrations. Supergirl and Wonder Woman try to survive on Darkseid's world of Apokolips.

I don't have an issue with the use of AI art; the results are actually pretty good. The real problem is the story near the end—specifically in Chapter 7, where Kara treats Diana that way, and the ending of Chapter 8.
Why did the theme have to turn so dark and gruesome? You have three sexy, hot superheroines, yet the ending involves them getting beheaded and scalped. Even though it isn't explicitly shown, the narration makes it clear—it’s a total waste.
It started off great, building up a lust-filled atmosphere—with Diana and Kara forced to become whores and even getting gangbanged on a train, yet actually they enjoying it—but then that theme all falls apart. Diana end up as champions for Granny Darkseid, become a ruthless killer; it’s a massive letdown that completely killed my interest.
If the story continues but keeps that dark, gruesome theme, I’d rather it didn't continue. I’d prefer it if they stayed as sex workers for Mammon, or kept wandering in search of an escape—even if that meant constantly getting gangbanged by the locals or maybe lead to another lewd and nsfw scenario.

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First off thanks for the feedback I do appreciate it. I know the ending was dark, but there epilogue sets up hope for them with 7 more heroines coming to the rescue. I really enjoyed making this so there might be a sequel with them coming.

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This is a masterpiece! Thank you marcus!

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Thanks!

Sequel inbound!

https://e-hentai.org/g/4132734/3eb862d7f2/

Complete sequel here!

https://e-hentai.org/g/4163194/733cfaebcc/

Last edited on 01 September 2026, 21:29.

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