my 1st time trying to TL. the TL itself isn't as hard as i thought but the editing.. daymn took me 2 days learning photoshop.

so anyway, some of the pages i added some word just to match the context, some context may got lost since im not very proficient in english *english is my 3rd language and japs is my 4th

and also i havent learn one bit about redraw and cleaning so dont expect the picture quality to be good

in case you find some page got out of context because of my TL please do comment, i only use AI just to search for the context / kotoba i dont know the kanji of

reason to TL this with bad quality? coz i like aheazif/sanatuki works and waiting for proper english TL takes too long might as well try do it myself

in the future imma TL the doujin i like 1st and not having any plan to open commission for now (since i know im still shiet at editing)

You could at least try to let someone proof read or at least let the AI fix your grammar mistakes and capitalisation issues. Page 7 alone "she have huge boobs too" is absolutely egregious to read. I am sorry but saying the "TL itself isn't hard" when it is this bad is...... more than a stretch. I really would love to not shit talk a translation this much but this is just bad. Please keep these to yourself. Aside from that, nobody would comission you if this was the quality you would deliver. Please add rough translation tag.

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i see.. thanks for the feedback, im still trying to do better. sometime i know the context / the meaning but when i start translating it to english using the actual word directly makes the meaning lost. hence sometime i made the word myself according to context

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do you just not realize that this is going to be the only English translation this book is going to have? 99.9% of the time a book gets a single English TL and this highly busted version is now that English TL

anyone who can't read Japanese and who ever comes across this book is going to have your wack shit as their only exposure to this artist's book. congrats I guess? great way to show your love for the artist huh, by literally ruining it for the reader

next time just keep the shit to yourself if you can't do it properly or can't convince someone who can do it properly to work on it for you. artists already have to deal with having all their shit pirated and hosted for free, the least you dickheads can do is not add insult to the injury by wholesale shitting all over the book while pretending you "really love their work"

if this is the consequence of your love then I'd hate to see how you treat something you dislike

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It may not be the best translation but its good enough to at least understand and get off to. If someone is going to be upset about a machine TL they can do the damn translating themselves or shut up. I love Sanatuki's work so having this was an instant favorite. Keep it up and you'll get better with the translations over time.

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i dont usually mind MTL since i just accepted it happens now but i think next time if you gonna do this atleast learn how to make text not look weird due to spacing and other stuff. then again i guess you did say you havnt laerned redraw and cleanign yet. my advice would be take some more time to learn , remeber to add rough TL tag too.

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It's fine if you want to do this for your own use but there's no reason for you to shit up the website by posting it.

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i dont wanna add to the hate flood but man its such a shame this is way less likely to get a real TL. i love cult stuff like this and theres no tag for it so i only have a handful of works i can revisit. sucks to know this one will likely never be legible

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I appreciate the fact that this wasn’t MTL, but it’s still not a good translation and the typesetting makes it difficult to read what *is* there. Definitely keep trying and improve your skills, but in the future just translate something more obscure that’s less likely to get a proper translation. Posting something bad for something as popular as Sanatuki is just gonna get you hate.

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This is Throwawaywhatever's account by the way.

It reeks of the same translation. I bet he'd release a "much better" AI translation after this just like what he did with their previous doujin releases.

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