This is my first translation, as well as my first time doing typesetting or any sort of image editing in general. I know it's rough around the edges, but I hope this is good enough for more people to be able to enjoy this manga as much as I did.
Any constructive criticism are welcomed, as I plan to translate some other works that were released years ago and flew under everyone's radar

Thank you for translating Gyouza Teishoku work! My advice is you should make the text size smaller and arrange them better. They're way too close to the border of the text bubbles. And dont forget to add period (.) at the end of each sentence.

And it would look better if you also translate the moaning/sfx bubbles. You can leave the big sfx, just do the ones in bubbles.

Use the tankoubon version if it's available, as it's less censored. https://e-hentai.org/s/9da12400dc/2621944-110

Last edited on 14 August 2026, 01:46.

Base +12, つつるー +6

Page 16 feels a bit rough grammar wise. Specifically the "aren't you enjoying too much being punished by a fucking bitch?!".

I can understand using just punished instead of what was literally called a punishment rape, but overall the English is clunky. In particular the "too much" doesn't belong in the middle of the sentence, especially when it is at the end of the sentence in the raw. Maybe instead try something like "Aren't you enjoying being raped by a fucking bitch a little too much?!". Literal translation can be clunky so my personal preference, although I am still learning, is to treat word order as fluid where possible if translating instead of simply understanding.

Also rape-corrected feels very clunky and you use it inconsistently, as the term was also used on the aforementioned page 16, consider using subtext here in the translation, similar to ruby text, so say raped and in the margins between lines write corrected or vise versa. For an example see the bottom left hand text bubble of this page https://e-hentai.org/s/3554c2e6bb/4061370-21

The raw uses 甘えさせて but uses ruby text to mean break こわして and the English translation uses spoil as the translated word and puts break in subtext above it. Doing something similar with raped and corrected could help with the clunkiness of this, even if the original didn't use ruby text.

Last edited on 22 August 2026, 21:52.

Base +6

Tfw I like confident small chested girls, but the she never takes off her top in the manga...

Base +6