Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/4091602/db12dbb8ba/

Taken from DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01690221.html

this is a sick and Evil story. the authoer clearly needs help he or sho hates religion thats for sure. too bacc, but also the art is sub standard, not good enough to make this at all memorable

just throw it away. dont bother to read it.

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I don't want to hear "the art is substandard" from the guy who thought this was okay to post https://e-hentai.org/g/1118707/c3ecf70e55/

That aside this is definitely not Jimadoor's best, it strays a long way from the actually good hypnosis themes he's good at in favor of a more generic corruption story and suffers for it.

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@BlueMoonCircle

Loooool my dude some people have religious corruption kinks. It's not any different from dojins that have Shrine Maidens fall for yokai/oni/evil gods, just focusing on Catholicism over Shintoism.

Like seriously, *this* is a 'sick and evil story', but this entire website is full of non-con, questionable age stuff, beastiality or guro or whatever? That stuff could be considered 'evil' too, but I just click away and make note to avoid that dojin then. Just do the same, avoid corruption stories. Its not evil--

Like, it's a *fantasy*. It's *fiction*. It's *not real*.

As for the actual content, @Ahegaosensei has it right, this isn't the best of jimadoor's work hypnosis wise, and some of his art has always had a bit of an anatomy issue, but he's always willing to push facial expressions and try hard angles, and that ends up giving his work this perfect representation of the idea of erotic hypnosis. I really admire that about him. Is it perfect? Nah. Is it hot? Hell yeah.

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Omg wow. Just saw BlueMoonCircle's comment "art is sub standard" "just throw it away. dont bother to read it." and then saw the work he/she has done. Ya no one ever needs to give any of BlueMoonCircle's comments, opinions or work any respect or consideration. Absolute bottom of the barrel individual. Clearly gets lowest scores in every category: intelligence, writing ability, artistic ability, critical thinking, open mindedness, kindness, etc. I try not to just shit on people cuz they're bad at something but BlueMoonCircle needs to not criticize others when their own substance is so poor. One of those people that makes you ask, "are they really this bad and dumb or are they just trolling?" Cuz it's hard to imagine someone being this bad/wrong without intentionally trying.

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Page 9: "How, how she you know?"
Lmao, what?

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"God, why didn't you help me?" That's a real good question. Maybe God was on the toilet or out buying a pack of smokes, and didn't see what was happening to her. Or maybe he was watching the whole time, and judging her. Never lifted a single finger to help his nun. She dedicated her whole life to God and helping people. That defensive wall spell of hers was useless. The Succubus didn't even seem threatened by it. The spell was more of a mild annoyance to her. That wine of hers, the titty slugs, the lust crest she put on the Nun's stomach, and her brainwashing abilities; those were all incredibly powerful.

The nun resisted as hard and long as she could. An impressive effort. Her God abandoned her in her hour of need. But I'm sure he'll be there when she dies. He'll be there to punish her for not being perfect. I guess he expects her to just never give in, and suffer for however many decades it takes to die of old age. What a joke. This story is a reflection of real life, where evil is incredibly overpowered. So powerful, that most of our rulers can torture, rape, ritualistically murder small children, eat them, and get away with it. They don't even care that we know. It's a big club, and we're not in it. Why do I bring this up? I see enough of evil triumphing over good in the real world. I'm real fucking tired of it. So when I look at fiction, I sure as fuck don't want to see more of that. Why not give the nun some real powers? Have her subdue the succubus, and then correctively rape her for her evil deeds. Or go the orgasm denial route. Nothing better than seeing a smug overconfident character, get humbled. I hated the succubus in this story. She was basically invincible. The nun had zero chance against her.

I won't say the artwork is bad. But I don't care for the style. There is something about the way the faces are drawn, that is off.

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