Artist Links:
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/spectrumshift
https://bsky.app/profile/na7urallycanine.bsky.social
https://bsky.app/profile/na7urallycanine2.bsky.social
https://twitter.com/Na7urallyCanine
https://www.weasyl.com/~SpectrumShift
https://picarto.tv/Na7urallycanine
https://www.patreon.com/SpectShift
https://na7turally.square.site
https://www.loona.dog

That's a new one. Pretty nice.

Base +6, thejakeman +7

Art is good and story is passable. It really could've used a complete draft phase before publishing pages. The first dozen pages muddle the characterization, as reactions and dialogue vary wildly or against their established personality. It has paper thin character complexity via internal thought, that is trying to juxtapose the interpersonal action and speech that defines their archetype. Meanwhile events push forward with a figment of motivation.

The jump between pages 27 & 28 are a good example, where there is an abrupt time & clothing change within the same location and presumably the same conversation. I could understand that the artist may have intended to convey this story as an arc from morning to evening of a single day, with attention to lighting & shadows established as a throughline during coloring. However, the execution feels like an extra or extended story was tacked onto the gallery rather than planned. Which, is faaaaarrr more acceptable if it was conveyed.

Last edited on 21 August 2026, 21:18.

Base +9, masterreviewer1000 +29, Mr. Xecret +7, fernendoff +8, nico2927 -6, Somethingsomething33 +5, Torcoolguy +7, Draconis122 +6, killlop +6, thejakeman -7, chris3274 +6, Qwertius +22, 我是Abbaabbaabba +5

feels kinda like a fan edit if im honest.

Base +6, Somethingsomething33 +5

The art is nice, the story is not for me though.

Base +7, masterreviewer1000 +29, Draconis122 +6, dposer +6, thejakeman -7

Such an unnecessary plot point. Just make them hung as a horse and have at it. The whole conversation about stealing dicks halfway through turned out more comical than it should.

Base +6, roarg -6, thejakeman -7, Usagi_Shino -8, StrongBrush1 -6, SLIDING_INTO_THE_DMS -6, epiq fail -6, F-O-X -12, bigblackD -16