If you have any advice or critique let me know, I'm also working on a few others translation, mostly gyaru stuff and some other Buta comics.
I'd be happy to know if something could be better specially since english isn't my first language,and like I've said before this was my first time doing a proper scanlation/translation of something
Also I don't want to keep bothering my friends all day, so if you are a native speaker and want to help proofreading, let me know here.