This is the first gallery I’ve uploaded; I hope it won’t be the last. To be honest, even though my username is "translations," the translation itself was largely AI-assisted; however, all the typesetting and a good portion of the cleaning and redrawing were done by me (except for a small part of a background, lmao).

The truth is, I have some experience translating this type of doujinshi, but I’ve never made them public—it’s just been a personal hobby. I felt that the time and effort I put into this deserved to be seen by someone, so I hope you like it.

Credits to the original artist: https://foruu-radicalmp.fanbox.cc/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/4076199/1542205d62/

I will say that is a decent translation, honestly. There were a couple of choices that I would've translated differently and at least one spelling mistake. Crucially, there were no parts of the dialogue that got dropped either.

The whole "expansion ritual" innuendo is tricky because "expansion" and "addition" are ambiguous in English - whereas, 増築 always has connotation in building/architecture/construction/etc. That one is a hard one to convey and keep the innuendo.

Translating 都市神 as "urban deity" is one where I would've possibly chosen "city-god" (i.e. - the god-form of the real city) - but it's defensible.

Normally, I'm one to immediately downvote this, but after doing my own comparison, it's pretty accurate.

Paid commissions though? no...

Base +14, IdSplay01 +2, tsuza +8, Silver_Kirin +6