If you have any advice or critique let me know, I'm also working on a few others translation, mostly gyaru stuff and some other comics.

I'd be happy to know if something could be better specially since english isn't my first language,and like I've said before this was my first time doing a proper scanlation/translation of something

Also I don't want to keep bothering my friends all day, so if you are a native speaker and want to help proofreading, let me know here.

Nina <3

This was pretty good! Thanks for taking the time to translate and upload it. I don't speak any other languages myself, so I think it's really cool seeing people who can translate between multiple languages.

There were a few small parts that read a little weird to me, just little things, but I understood what you meant. For example, I think “I've sweat a lot today” would've probably worked better as “I've been sweating a lot today” or “I was sweating so much today," and “Is she having any fun?” would sound more natural as “Is she having fun?" Nothing that made it difficult to understand, though.

I'd definitely love to see Etuzan's 1000 Yen Cut 5 translated someday too! But I understand you mentioned that his work is harder to translate, so no pressure. Thanks again for the translation!

And good luck with your JLPT studies!

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Thanks a lot @Ijustdoknow that was a very good explaination, I'll take note of them and also thanks for the good luck wish!

Also I've added to the last page, but I'm also doing the 4 and 5 of the 1000 yen Cut series, and his new ghost one as well, but will still take some time.

Thanks a lot for the advice again

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do you got links for raw&other translation?

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pg 28 "we should go take shower" -> "we should go take a shower"

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@2o171218 thanks for pointing that out, I hate it that I can't update a single page on gallery, but I've already updated on my files, thanks a lot again

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lucky man, make her your wife and make her happy.

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a few typos but it was great, thanks nina!

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Thanks for the translation. Great to see stuff from this author, I really appreciate it

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It's a more pleasant ending to "My First Friend", if the male M.C. wasn't a complete fuckboi.

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Eh, I prefer this artist to draw older, more MILF-ish women seducing or being seduced by younger men.

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