Strangely decent MTL, though of course it had the usual wrong gender pronouns issue because of the way Japanese works.

@hazlenussy do you clean up your MTL's or just run them straight through? Gemini-flash is getting weirdly good at making stuff readable and keeping text aligned and in the bubbles, even if the translations might not be "spot on" in some stuff it puts out.

Just one year ago MTLs were completely unreadable (even disregarding gender and subject issues due to quirks of japanese), so this is a massive upgrade. It looks like it's even resizing the english text to match bolder/bigger japanese characters.

Base +6, Cocassu -7

I refuse to believe the author wrote this and "didn"t realize how NTR-heavy it was" until the end. Like, you clearly have two characters with unspoken feelings for each other on the verge of realizing them, just for the horny retard friend to bungle his way into their sex, steal her virginity, and CUM ALL OVER THE CUCK'S FACE FOR FUCK'S SAKE. Like, come off it. That was just gay. I don't care what we agreed on beforehand, if my "friend" did that, I'm kicking him full force in the nuts.

Now, I can see the author is playing the long con by setting up various things like Asami (black haired kid) properly getting close to Mayu (Pigtails), meanwhile Kenta (Retard) is generally horny and inconsiderate, but might also have feelings for Mayu. So I'm guessing Part 2 will be the "All is lost" chapter, where Kenta confesses to Mayu so they can date, and Asami (And Mayu, honestly) continues being spineless, just letting shit happen for no reason, meanwhile Chiaki (Bob cut) has to pick up the pieces AGAIN and keep fucking Asami in the interim while trying to convince him to stop being a pussy. Then in Part 3, something dramatic happens where Asami finds his balls and finally tells Kenta to kick rocks and gets together with Mayu properly. All in all, a bit too melodramatic for my porn tastes, but hey, I'm just speculating. It all just reads like a slightly less dogshit "Chitose", and that story was avant garde pornographic trash.

Chiaki is carrying this story on her back right now. The author said this "hurt" him to write, so I'm trusting that means a happy ending, but I've been let down before.

Base +6, xiedazhi +6, THeVaSHok1 +6, fella pure +14, Orengestar +8, Porokichin66 +9

@Snotnose9001

You can either believe Fuguta-ke was dishonest by hiding the contents of this doujinshi until release, or Fuguta-ke truly was stupendously ignorant of what he was creating here. Either way, this book was only classified as netorare at Fanza on release day, hours after it became available for download upon purchase, despite the preview page being available since June, without even a hint this work contained such themes.

Fuguta-ke babbles about this being hurtful to create, as if he could foresee the anger this could instigate on some people, but not once he mentions NTR or adjacent elements like BSS on that excuse of a afterword page. That realization came up with the updated Fanza store page.

If Fuguta-ke somehow accidentally created something that is so obviously similar to Katsura Airi's Karami Zakari, he deserves some kind of ignoramus award, but if he was intentionally malicious and is only pretending to be ignorant, then he is a pest deserving of any flak directed his way.

Base +3, Firminister +5, Mythicmyth +6, speederzdk +6, THeVaSHok1 +6, Goukenimaru +22, Porokichin66 +9

Netorare where mc wins in the end? looks good to me. I went here because it went viral and people hating it because author always made pure love stuff suddenly drew NTR. But this is better than what i expected, i wonder if there will be a sequel cuz the other dude kinda aiming for revenge lol

Base +6, Firminister -5

This story is heavy AF. And yeah, it's a lot of BSS and NTR tropes story with lot of foreshadowing of even more drama and controversial developments. I'm still hopeful about the story development, however just like @Snotnose9001 and other long time user of this website, I have been let down a lot of times before. I for one just want a story where the bull/bad friend actually got their comeuppance and inverse the typical NTR trash like "Chitose" and "Karami Zakari". Come on author, let both the girls call out the bull rapist, manipulative, asshole behaviors and maybe even some jail time if possible.

Base +9, Weird Doddle +6

19 freaking days after the original release. Fuguta-ke spent plenty of time doing an apology tour on X, claiming that yes he did not realize this story would be considered to be in the BSS or NTR territory, claiming that wasn't his intention, thus he updated the Fanza store page hours within release after getting some initial feedback from angry early buyers who felt they were lied to about the contents of what just paid for, apparently in his mind he was only creating a dramatic and a little hurtful story, but since the four main characters are just friends and he plans for a happy ending the thought this could be considered to be netorare didn't cross his mind, or so he says.

Which makes me wonder, Fuguta-ke must be one oblivious dude if he thinks a pushy guy taking TWO virginities, back to back, in front of a passive protagonist, one of which was a girl trying to be romantic with him first, would not trigger any unsuspecting first time reader to immediately decry "this thing is very netorare-like!"

If he somehow was the only hentai author in Japan who didn't know Karami Zakari (the best selling netorare doujin series ever made), now he definitely knows what Karami Zakari is, because everyone and their mothers brought up the clear similarities on X, even those who actually liked this.

That way, Fuguta-ke still asks for some patience, insisting a happy ending is in order, but what the fuck this oblivious dude even considers a "happy ending" is questionable at this point, if he really did not notice the netorare elements this first chapter contained. Then again, the initial complaints this had might've pushed Fuguta-ke to make sure he delivers this supposed "happy ending" in the clearest terms possible in the future.

Base +4, Firminister +5, Goukenimaru +22