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First of all, some of the pages are out of order, like page 8 should come before page 7 and page 14 should come after page 16. Second of all, this was lazy as shit. The backgrounds are inconsistent, Vanilla's ears and tuff of hair aren't drawn properly, the attempts at humor are cringe, and the pacing is beyond rushed. Lastly, Vector shouldn't have an accurate crocodile dick when he's just as anthropomorphic as the rest of the Mobians. It just makes things so inconsistent. No, scratch that. It makes things lazy! This whole comic is lazy! -.-

Base +10

Great and cute, need more of that kind of thing. 🤗

Base +7, masterreviewer1000 +29