Tomosaka's style is getting better.

Saw this story was already done in other languages but English, and decided to give it a go.

I cleaned it all up, did my best with de-censoring it, flipped some panels so they would flow better, AND I will admit, I may have had a little too much fun with the dialogue. But it's still the basic story and not a rewrite.

Hope you like it.

I could tell she had a dick from the way her chest was drawn on the cover.
very talented artist.

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This would be hot in chasity

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MC has like 3 different body types on different pages. looks like completely different people.

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yea the breast size keeps changing

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Was this AI assisted in the drawings? Very little consistency with the body, especially the breasts.

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Swap the hair colors. Indians don't @ me.

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Not bad but kind of a weak ending to be honest

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Please do more chapters where she get big tits for her master and in a chastity cage

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Why the fuck does the MC have a manly chest in one panel and women boobs in the next one? It looks like incoherent AI slop

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