If you have any advice or critique let me know, I'm also working on a few others translation so all advice is welcome.

I'd be happy to know if something could be deone better specially since english isn't my first language and I've just started this whole scanlation thing by myself.

If you have interest in other series or commissions let me know!

Nina <3

I think I created the previous gallery by mistake before so Im making it again

I have never seen someone use interval for 休み. The whole sentence feels a bit off to me. Isn't she saying, I will be waiting for you at the usual place during break? My Japanese level isn't very good, but the English feels off.

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@red death68 Indeed break would be the usual translation for yasumi. Maybe in English for this context it would fit better to use break.
In my mind at a school context it is called interval, but I can see how that can be a bad interpretation on my part, in English is more like a space of time right? Thanks for the advice!

Hope you still had an enjoyable reading!

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"this series will probably go on 3 more volumes"

God we're so blessed

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@ninaremi Interval really does feel like a weird choice, In English break does describe a period of time that you have to rest from doing something else, like taking a break from learning, but it has certain nuances of being free to do other things. Interval feels more stiff like it was scheduled not for relaxation but for a separate task all together.

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@red death68 that was a very nice explanation thank you for doing so, I think I did a small bias towards my first language in this case, instead of thinking how it would be in English.

Thanks again for doing so , I'll keep in mind if these cases show up again

Nina <3

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Good non MTL translation, nice cleaning and lettering, open to feedback AND POLITE? @ninaremi what are you, a alien?

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