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Pg 5 "It really do they realize..."

Base +6, digitXSX +11, sharkunt +4, tentacle-man61 +19, ☆Loli Police☆ +14, DevilsAdvocate +6, djgee2f +7

It's nice to have this in English, but the script really needed to be proofread before being inserted and published. Grammatical errors and typos abound, including misplaced commas and apostrophes, awkward sentence construction, and run of the mill errors (confusing "it's" with "its", for example).

Hopefully a second version with a corrected script is on the way. This dojin is too hot (albeit generic) not to have a better script.

Base +9, Schroedinger +7, magiclamp +11, Refon_S +7, Chen Nyan~ +4, digitXSX +11, themasamune +10, ILoveMico +9, BlickWinkel +8, chiba masato +10, Delta Jan +5, Dongs McGee +9, pervman +8, and 13 more...

Thanks guys. I'll work on that right now and post the fix in a bit.

Base +7, digitXSX +11, themasamune +10, ILoveMico +9, Delta Jan +5, Zeospartan +11, tentacle-man61 +19, ☆Loli Police☆ +14, DevilsAdvocate +6, petalferrous +7, LegoArielFanMaster +7

Page eight. Tiggole bitties.

Please tell me i'm not the only one who thought of DWmM.

Base +3, tentacle-man61 +19, ☆Loli Police☆ +14, DevilsAdvocate +6

The last bubble on page 5 is quite possibly the stupidest thing I've ever seen in a Touhou doujinshi. Seriously, that's just amazing.

Base +8, Zakuzelo +5, Zelinko +9, Infidell775 +5, tentacle-man61 +19, ☆Loli Police☆ +14, DevilsAdvocate +6, petalferrous +7, toravisu +9, djgee2f +7, Lewd Bird +9, Mrtesla1 +6

Not bad. I'll await for the improved version soon dude.

Thx anyway~!

Base +8, ☆Loli Police☆ +14, DevilsAdvocate +6

Totally out of character, what's the point?

Base +3, kserox -24, uckssake +6, Blopa +11, LegoArielFanMaster -7, Rouge･ -30, Gahasa +18, avrelivs +6, Lewd Bird +9, ArchAIngel -6, The Inker -8

lol yeah, the rabbit's hole

Base +4, warellis +5

"The more of a big shot a youkai is, the less they can mess with a human. Therefore, let's rape big shot youkai." is the plot of this, and that's just...

I know hentai logic, but fuck man. They didn't even TRY with this, did they?

Base +6, chicagotypewriter -6, warellis +5, Rouge･ -30, Gahasa +18, The Inker -8, avrelivs +6, Lewd Bird +9, RubyRoy +2, Mrtesla1 +6

lmao this is so cancerous

Yuuka could have killed them all since page 5 just sayin

Base +3, Rouge･ -30, Gahasa +18, avrelivs +6, Lewd Bird +9, SnowballDrone -6, The Inker -8