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When little brown girls grow up.

man.... i don't know why... but i didn't like it too much ... :/
Anyways thanks for the translation!

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urgh slut alert...

/hate this one

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I'm guessing some folks didn't like this because of the transformation of "innocent little girl > promiscuous woman". And I think that's fair.

But I really enjoyed it, mostly because of one particular scene (pages 13-14), when he asks her why she did it. Her wistful expression along with the actual wording of her response made it feel more...real, I guess?

Anyways, I liked it a lot. Not every woman is always going to be a pure, delicate flower; but she still remembered what it was like when she was.

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Can't this guys think of anything else than the same clichés over and over again?

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Page 9 middle left, think of a horse. Disturbed

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Well, childs grow up, I can tell you, the cute girls for when I was a child are how gorgeous ladies... And the first love making-love wish can be true sometimes... Jejeje...

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Slutty girls are my new fetish.
EDIT:
WTF, did I really wrote that 8 months ago?? I was either really drunk or high that day...

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I hate it when I get friendzone chocolates.

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I'm sad he don't got her first time.....but a t least he will have all the others.

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id marry the shit out of her when she made the first love comment.

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Ehh... I'd have enjoyed it a lot more if instead of turning her into a skank, as her brother so eloquently put it, if it had just matured the beautiful charm she already had.

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I wanna punch her stupid face in.

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He missed out on that DFC tomboy goodness.

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Really sweet and wholesome. I love Gyaru's that are affectionate.

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