Image set of Joanna Dark from Perfect Dark Zero. View the 'Read Me' image for faster browsing using the icon system provided.

LOL...well, that was a waste of a click

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@WascallyWabbit Wait...What's wrong with it? Does the drawing suck? Her face is messed up? Not enough variety? Please be more specific. (This is my first attempt at hentai, so I need more feedback)

EDIT 1:
@Suzaku87 Yeah, artist name will stay 'southpawper'. I was hoping the thumbnail guide I provided would help people browse faster by letting them pick only what they wanted to see, but I will limit versions of poses to just two or three (at least for wetness options) rather than 20 from now on.

EDIT 2:
@Ikonos I will keep this in mind. I did vary the facial expressions and the amount of wetness also, but I should have realized that they are subtle and not the first things that get noticed. Thanks for the feedback.

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You need more variety... It's pretty much the same thing over and over. More poses and maybe intercourse. But if it's your first time then take it slow. Nothing too hardcore but something different each time.
The art is fine, i look forward to seeing more. Will your name be southpawper for your artist name?

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well southpawper you don't even change it just color and the little hearts you get an A for drawing because it's appertain that you have some decent skill with drawing however most of the time just having the same picture over and over again will never work so i suggest try to make different pictures or maybe a story to go along with it and in doing so we can all be saved from a bad gallery but it's your first so it is lucky on this website after a few days all bad gallerys get forgotten

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