Translated/Edited/Decensored by me

I was reading the rewrites of this, and I gagged at the usage of western names over the given Japanese ones, the guesslation of "stick it into my pussy, durr hurr" and making characters say things that do not match their behavior. So I decided to take it upon myself to see what I could do about this.

There's a good 100 pages dedicated to this story for this volume, plus ANOTHER volume that concludes the story of Mao and her brother. If you guys can critique on my work (what could be better, etc.) that'd be great!

EDIT: I increased the quality of the jpg files, and also did a little change which I forgot to do for the last page.

Thanks for taking it upon yourself to translate this. I like Zero no Mono, so seeing one of his stories translated makes me happy.
I can't comment on translation's accuracy, since I don't know Japanese, but assuming that it's accurate, I liked the flow in the text and the editing seemed good enough to me, so keep up the good work.

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Nice one! we're hoping for U to continue dude ^^

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Thanks. It's rarely that I see an incest story between siblings with deep character development. I will see if I can work on future chapters. I am actually pretty new to using photoshop to edit, but I am learning.

One thing I learned: don't bother with removing the speech bubbles with moaning sounds and ellipses, it'll just quadruple the work.

Oh yeah, how do you go about linking to another gallery in the description? I posted a URL but it's not clickable.

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Great to see someone start to translate Wasurena 1&2, for THE PUBLIC. Personally. I have Desudesu's complete commissioned translation of Wasurena 1 & translation of the last 5 chapters of Wasurena 2. But i can not share them. Due to a promise i made to someone, some years back.

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is his dick upside down?

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This looks promissor. Thank you and good luck with the project ;] I liked it.

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This is great stuff man. Its a shame that most of Zero no Mono's works go untranslated. I've only seen several chapters translated from different tanks, other than that they're untranslated or terrible rewrites. Will you only be doing the story with Mao and her brother?

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this should have cheating tag

cause she is married see the ring at page 9

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