Originally taken from here:

https://e-hentai.org/g/305723/9611fa63e5/

Ponygirls are the best, don't you think? :D . Althrough, what's featured in this one aren't exactly, you know, your typical ponygirls (or at least, they're not portrayed as such, anyway). But whatever, still great! :D . Alas, there's in my opinion far too few works with ponygirls in them around here.. Well, all the more reason for me to translaste this one, I should think! :D . Just a pity that the author/artist of this one hasn't done any other works beyond these two... Anyway, enjoooy!

I was expecting snu-snu

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that was pretty brutal, how do we flag this as offensive to everyone?

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Well the art is pretty much terrible, but the concept is a winner.

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Terrible Art - Check.
Decent Writing - Check.
Brilliant Concept - Check.
Well Done Mind Break - Check.

Where do I go to have this redrawn by Radiohead or Erect Touch?

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half-breeds good

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Why are the best corruption writers almost always terrible artists?

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