Second Gallery i tried, i mede this some time after the lyra one, this was missing even the dialogs XD, and i could think in someone to bang pinkie for the time bieng, hope after college is over (in this part of the world im busy to hell with exams) i could finish it in a semi-decent way, and i know, the lyra one still is missing a sort of plot
-pages missing, still-

-i dlike to ink this, but u know, short time issues-
- now starrring pokie :D
-not expect some inking soon, i suck at digital art X_X , and i dont kwno crap about programs to do comics and shit

Needs more hooves, less hands.

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Consider inking to improve readability.

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