Who the fuck talks like this guy writes?

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@LineArk I don't think English is his first language

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To bad they just stopped story one.

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@Gigaorc, You're right, but this is one of his older works I believe. He's gotten a lot better, still a few grammar errors, but much more 'readable'.

Edit:The first chapter is from a few years ago, chapter 2 was just released* You can see the difference.

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Hmm..i think I can understand better if the English was a little bit organize...

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I wonder how many of the posters are multi-lingual. I see the same comments about his work and once again I think they miss the whole point. I understand that the comments are there to help the artist excel but constant negative remarks without any positive suggestions is counterproductive. As Monaj pointed out, and I agree - this is a earlier work and he is improving.

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