I admire the considerable effort it must have taken to translate this, but English is not your first language, is it? Perhaps you might want to get somebody who speaks English natively to proofread your next translation.

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It's very rare to see a light novel is completely translated into English. Great Job!

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It's a little rough on the edges, but still- job well done !

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:O amazing & rare, i actually enjoyed it... upload more if u can.

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Wow, nice job! Anyone want to work on 2D Dream Novels which I'm uploading? At least the most famous ones? xD

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This is a welcome deviation from the norm around here, my thanks for the upload.

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https://www.doujinshi.org/book/337016/Sono-Hanabira-ni-Kuchizuke-wo-Valentine-Kyousoukyoku/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/609533/76503b1947/
Korean Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/1121725/5431977263/

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