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Can someone tell me why the hell her shirt is like that...

laefielx
Ahh ok i get it now. Thanks for telling me lol :D

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SK1
In boorus there's a tag for that
Impossible T-Shirt
Just fanservice really
Also poor/lucky guy he will limp for weeks

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Could use some proofreading, this has a lot of missing words and awkward english.

Edit:

Sure, let me list what i see:

Some bubbles have issues with textsize (text touching border) or aren't centered

Typos, Grammar and missing words:
009: Dont [make] such a face
013: I'm sorry for making you come here [to] wake seishi every morning
020: Aren't you going to stick it in until all [of your dick is in] or [until your entire dick is in]
023: Why are you storing [it] in a jar?
026: Take it [off] please
027: Did it [backfire]
The entire lower panel could need rewording, almost all bubbles have rather awkward wording.
028: It's only fair that you take full [responsibility] now

EDIT2:

You can easily go down 2-3 textsizes with it still being readable. Many people use comic readers anyways. You could also switch fontsize from pt to pixel if you want to do really small adjustments.

On page 027 i mean in particular especially those bubbles:

I tried relieving but (masturbating? relieving [myself]?)
I'm already dripping wet from all the endurance ([enduring this long])

EDIT 3:

It kind of is, but the sentence still sounds unfinished rather than better by leaving that out..

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＠lapan
Just point them out here instead of just saying there are mistakes. I'm actually expecting people to do so but not many are willing to.

edit:
Ok, thank you for taking your time!

About points #13 and #23, I thought the omissions I made were correct. Will try to check it to make sure.
About #027 second point, I'll take a look on how it could be reworded. I guess the way I left it is not really easy to grasp the idea. I'll try to make it more clear, but just to be sure, you're referring to the two bubbles on the right side of the panel right?

edit 2: Isn't it clear, by the context, that what she tried to relieve was her horny(ness?)? I thought it was, but if it really isn't, than I'll rewrite thinking of that point.

And about the issues with texts touching borders, you had to see how the original was! But the main problem is that the bubbles are way too irregular, making it hard to keep the text centralized and withing a good margin from the border. I could reduce the font size, but I think it would need to be way too small to be esthetically good...

@AfroThunda
If you find anything else besides what lapan already pointed out, please do so! Or if you want to give some extra comments on what lapan already pointed out, feel free to do so too!

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A Bondage H-manga that is actually good, this is a rare treat that we will all happily enjoy.

More Please, Jesus Shadow Moon!

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I was going to point out some of the mistakes and whatnot I noticed as well, but it seems Lapan's already on it. I'll be paying a visit to your site in the near future anyway (gotta pick up releases too). Cuz if feedback is what ye want, then feedback ye will receive :3

+1 for being willing to take criticism in order to improve.

@shadow moon
I'll likely be leaving comments on your site under their respective posts on your site as I read through your releases. Much simpler than clogging up the comments area with various amounts of QC.

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Pls translate the other ringo works plsssssssss

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Transparent shirt, latex gloves/stockings... and "Mother" just casually smiles?

What kind of fucked up place is this, and how do I get there???

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I want to see his mother naked so much... amazing ass

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