a webcomic created by me, Great Sage and CrystalAsh
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back with new artist fallenarkangel

Everything looks like it's covered in mud and/or dirt.

Base +12, catdrag0n +13, repico +5, volatile1 +7, Zero Angel +38, 4EverLost +31, selnxz +4, jaylou1010 +12

I like how the art style is getting better. Probably going to save this and marathon em all when more is written.

Base +7, AlekSlayer +9, Zero Angel +38, Wuffz +6

Love the artwork... Wish there was more than one update a week though! :P

Base +7, Zero Angel +38, jaylou1010 +12

Finally somewhat realistic reaction, not like ''Oh? Looks like i turned to a girl, time to masturbate.''

Base +6, volatile1 +7, Der Fuhrer +8, Zero Angel +38, hihihahahoho +11, 4EverLost +31, jaylou1010 +12

i dont think i understood the plot.............

Base +6, hihihahahoho -11, jaylou1010 -12

i am happy this project goes on, but the skill-gap between the two artists is damn huge. sorry i have to say this.

Base +6, crawdad22 +7, Zero Angel +38, ensane +8, 4EverLost +31, taj1994 +4, kamikaki +7, zackri +9, aloc1234 +23, sp0909 +7, Guestoid +9, hihihahahoho +11, escaper +7, and 3 more...

It's a shame. It was all going good until page 17. Seriously, you couldn't find an artist that couldn't only make KAWAII UGUU~ art?

Base +5, zackri +9, kamikaki +7, Guestoid +9, hihihahahoho +11, jaylou1010 +12, BatChan +5

I have to agree.... the change in art style is drastic and doesn't really help the comic.
It was great because it had a serious feel to it but now all went out the window with the new art style which makes it feel more like a comedy <_<;

Base +10, zackri +9, kamikaki +7, taj1994 +4, Guestoid +9, hihihahahoho +11, jaylou1010 +12, BatChan +5

In response to the question on page 18, I think you shouldn't try typing english text like it's japanese... letters going from top to bottom instead of left to right look terrible for that.

Base +9, zackri +9, kamikaki +7, Guestoid +9, hihihahahoho +11, jaylou1010 +12, BatChan +5

Gotta say, I don't love the art for the last four pages.

Base +6, zackri +9, Guestoid +9, hihihahahoho +11, jaylou1010 +12

changing gender is a lot more awkward when your not single.

Base +4, hihihahahoho +11, jaylou1010 +12

All the pages have been nicely drawn but the eye on the last panel of p. 22 looks wrong the eye looks off like either she's facing him and the eye is in the wrong place or she's facing towards the reader in which case she's missing an eye. Just pointing out the one bad area when the rest of it looks so good.

Base +8, hihihahahoho -11, zackri -9, jaylou1010 -12