The half-full bladded in 15-17 is an interesting touch though you could say it and the shit in page 9 are the bad form of Chehkov's Gun.

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I love happy endings.

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Ooji got netorared.

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Ooji masturbated to her anyway.

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Ojisan got to fuck a school girl, so though he didn't get her in the end, it is still a win. ^_~

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This is a NICE gallery! I had to favorite it at pic 2!

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Not once did this say that Ooji was her boyfriend in fact he's only mentioned at the end plus we don't see him suffer (or at all for that matter) so why is this netorare.

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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retarded ntr is retarded
kill yourself retarded stalking cuck faggot cuckothewander aka cuckthehan2

Last edited on 11 February 2021, 07:45.

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Happy End.

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 6. True to character 6. All out of 10.

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